高分作文写作技巧 满分句型养成 分类写作提纲
第一段要开门见山，直接拿出主题。给大家举个例子，比如，写我的妈妈，第一段直接就说 My mother is a worker. She is beautiful and she is a good mother. 明确自己的观点。
第二段就要说，她为什么是一个好妈妈。1. She works hard. 2. She is very strict with me. 3. She always encourages me and help me when I am in trouble. 详细说出妈妈的优点。
第三段得出结论。大家可以发表自己的观点，也可以提出建议和希望。如，I love my mother. I love my family!
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.
1)first, second, third, last(不推荐，原因：俗)
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐，原因：俗)
3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐，原因：俗)
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐，原因：俗)
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
8)most important of all, moreover, finally
9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
I cannot bear it.
可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.
I want it.
可以用短语表达：I am looking forward to it.
原因很简单，写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西，不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词，少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候，不应该之说nice这样空洞的词，应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted之类的形象词。再比如：
走出房间，general的词是：walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房间应该说：slip out of the room
小姐走出房间应该说：sail out of the room
小孩走出房间应该说：dance out of the room
老人走出房间应该说：stagger out of the room
(1)When I arrived at Wander Theme Park(万达乐园),I felt quiet hungry.
(2)If you take a ride in Wheel of Flames(风火飞轮),you can feel extremely free.
(3)I chose to take Rig Hazard(钻塔急坠),so that I could take a birds-eye view of the theme park.
(4) I recommend watching the play in Feishui Theatre (淝水剧场)，because it offers grand scerce.
(5) Although Mountain Spiash(急流勇进) is a popular project, it can make our bodies wet through.
(1)What I experienced in the park has left a deep impression on my mind.
(2)I believe that the project Big wheel(摩天轮) is most amusing.
(3) I love the project called Soaring with Dragon.(白龙飞天)
◎ Riding Soaring with Dragon supplies me a feeling of flying.
◎ To entertain myself, I took a ride on Anhui in the Air.(飞越安徽)
(4) While (I was) taking photos, I found that the battery of my iphone lost its power.
How exciting it is to overlook the theme park!
What a grand (壮观的)scene it is!
The packed lunch was so expensive that I coundn´t afford it!
It was you that comforted me to calm down
(1) I’m pleased to know that you’re greatly interested in ... ,so I’d like to share a piece of good news that there will be a ... .Now,let me offer you some useful information.
(2) It’s my great honor to invite you to entera ... .Now,let me offer you some useful information about it.
(3) It’s time for us to say goodbye to ourschool life soon.Surprisingly,there is a/an... prepared for us.Now,let me offeryou some information about it.
1.时间&地点：The ... will be held in Classroom 302 at 3o’clock in the afternoon on June 8th,2019.
(1)主题句：There will be various meaningful activitiesincluded in it.
(2)要点:First of all，You will be invited to .../You will begiven a chance to ... .which will ...
After that,It will be more than interesting for you to .../It will impress you a lot to ... so that ...
At last,doing sth. will play an important part in ... .So ...
That’s all.I firmly believe that if you join in it,you will ... .
That’s all.I sincerely hope that you can come and share the happiness/fun with us.
(1) 朋友：A friend in need is a friend indeed.I have a friendjust like that who often offers me much warmth in my life. Let me introduce him to you.
(2) 父母：If you ask me who is the most important one to me,without doubt,the answer is my ... . Let me introduce him to you .
(3) 老师：In both my life and study,my ... teacher is special to me because heis not only my teacher but also my friend who has made a great difference to my character.
1.外貌：... is very beautiful but a little fat withlong hair and big eyes.
2.性格：...is an outgoing woman who always getsalong well with people around her./ ... is very kind to others and easy to geton with./is so ready to help others that we all like to make friends with him.
3.爱好：She is especially good at cooking and often cooks different delicious foods for me.
(1)Linda is like an angel. Whenever I meet trouble, she will always be there. When Ifail my test, She always encourages me to face the fact bravely and then tries tohelp me to check the reason why I fail. At the same time, she shares her goodways of studying with me.
(2)My Chinese teacher, Ms Li, not only teaches us how to learn, but also teaches ushow to be a person. I remember I made a serious mistakes in Grade seven, that was to copy others’ homework. Ms Li knew that. Instead of being angry with me, she told me the importance of study and encouraged me to study hard to become a talented person in the future.
(3)Last term, I failed my exam. I was so that that I cried sadly in my room. When mymother came from work late, she talked with me patiently and cheered me up.That evening, when I woke up at night, my mother was still working. I was deeply moved. Then I made up my mind to study harder than before.
As a sunshine teenager, Xiao Hui is a good example for us to learn from./I will treasure the friendship forever.
Now I understand my father’s love to me. I will never forget what my father did forme and try my best to make him pleased.
He is an excellent teacher I will never forget and love himforever.
I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty in doing... .Don’t worry about it! Here are some useful suggestions I ‘d like to share with you.
1.主题句：Actually,if you are careful, you’ll find various simple ways to help you solve the problem.
First and foremost, It’s +adj/n.+for/of sb. to do ....So that...
In addition,you are supposed to do ... ,which can notonly ... but also ...
What’s more,you had better (not) do ... ,because ...
Last but not least,I suggest you (should) do ... ,from which,you’re able to do ...
With these suggestions carried out,I firmly believe you will improve ... a lot.
I sincerely hope that my suggestions can be of great help. Looking forward to your earliestreply.
With the development of the science and technology/society,...is becoming more and more serious./the problem about ...is under a heated discussion/ ... has become a hot topic.As for that,There are different opinions among people.
On the one hand,some people hold the idea that ... .The reasons are as follows.First, ....Second, ... .Last, ... .
On the other hand,others disagree.They suppose that ... .Because ... .More importantly, ....
As far as I’m concerned,every coin has two sides,and ... is not an exception.As long as wetreat ... properly,it will be of great help.
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